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I was told that writers are hard
Work. We complain, we whine,
We want what we cannot have:
Perfection.

But we’re worth it.

The tears of many wash upon our
Brows. The hearts of many wash
Clean with our tears, our dreams:
Hope.

But it’s not that easy.

To love that which is hard, is harder
Work. It requires bends, requires flexes,
Requires a peace of being and self:
Unshaken.

But so few are willing to try.

The steps begin, and already, doubts
Arise. We worry, we consider,
We want things at a distance:
Hesitation.

But easy is not part of the equation.

This is no math postulate, no
Work. This is our lives, a war,
This is a soul endeavor, a trial:
Transition.

But growth isn’t square pegs or round holes.

The life of a writer is growing, growing
Stronger. We place import on change,
The change in us, in our readers:
Character.

But it is all too easy to get lost.

I wish I could tell you how the time
Works. We see, we wonder,
We never really know:
Answers.

But the words are not there.

I would give you the stars, the
Fire. We would hold the heat,
The wonder between us:
Whispers.

But I have heard that writers are hard.

I would give you all, every ounce of
Work. A writer is never done, never sated,
Never wanting to be finished:
Immortality.

But all I have to give you is a little piece of mind.
©2009 ~Apolleon
:iconapolleon:

Author's Comments

An experimental piece with meter and form. One thing I've not seen nearly enough of is writers willing to MAKE their own poetic forms and stick to them. Sometimes, the joy of writing poetry comes not from its relative ease, but from its difficulty.

But only sometimes.

No rhyme scheme, a conversational meter, form represented with the line breaks and punctuation.

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:iconeveslyfox:
Awww, no comments yet! Well, I'll be the first.

I guess a good place to start is where you ended: I agree with you that writers shouldn't hesitate to forge their own meter and form. Hell, I need to more often. That's what I like about this piece: it has a solid theme, but is never really boring, changing and pulling you into the next stanza.

And, being a writer myself, I can't help but agree with the content of the poem itself. Good job!

--
You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star.
-Nietzsche
:iconapolleon:
Thank you kindly.

--
"Well, then, let's be bad guys."
-Jayne, Serenity

King's Gunslinger...
"He darkles. He Tincts."

"If I had a dragon, no one would mess with me."
-Myself

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